It's a good start

And that's really what it is, but I'm really feeling the muse. I keep getting these "further the plot" moments and it's good... I only did about two pages of work today. I got the Laleena to fill in the previous chapters - done, and now I'm working on chapter five. So far it's good, I wrote from a perspective that I've not done before - but Balin's voice was speaking loud and clear, so I gave the man his dues. He deserved it, trust me. He has a plan, so I'm going to let him talk. There it is.

I like the ideas so far, and I'm considering Taryne bits. I think we open her with an argument in councilland.