productive procrastination.

Misty maiden of dawn's end
When are you to come again?
Always here but never leaving
Till the spiders stop their weaving.

This is the beginning of Lacy's song, the one that Laleena will not know the whole of till the end of the Edmund segment. I decided that I needed to be productive today, and while I didn't get any homework done I did get five pages of writing done - plus about a paragraph.

I'm a bit worried about these pages though... I fear they are a bit, much. Laleena gets publicly spanked in front of a serving staff of about twenty. First her palms are whipped, but that is aparently not enough for eddy. I tried to make it as non-porn as possible, and I tried to make edmund still edmund but we'll see... we'll see what my collegue says. Everything has the ability to be cut. I can't help it that this is what he did to her. It just is.

The song comes at the end of the segment, as Laleena falls into slumber. This is just the beginning for her. The poor child.